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Alive, But Barely Living

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Sit/awake/concentrate./start to hate/you all over again./pictures last./but I/fade fast./I sit and laugh/at you all over again./you hate me, but I still love you. Who can tell just what I might do. I’m alive, but hardly living. Do you think I’ll be forgiving?/bitter/tears cried,/promises/lied./my heart/tied/between hating and loving you./harsh/words said./wished i/was dead./but/instead,/I’m hating and loving you./ you have me, but I still love you. Who can tell just what I might do. I’m alive, but barely living. Do you think I’ll be forgiving?
chopped-up hateful romantic Poetry
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Onycho's avatar
Beautiful poem! One question though...why did ya put it under prose?!
The rhythm is astounding!